Saturday April 28, 2018
Book 18: Mandatory Failure — Part III

Transcript

ELF: The kittens on the bridge will be sending armored troops at us any moment now.

Can you get us off this ship the way you got aboard it?

SCHLOCK: Sorry, no.

The shuttle I rode in on will be gone soon, and you don't fit into bulkhead conduits.

ELF: I'm brainstorming, Sergeant. We don't have time for "sorry."

Skip "sorry" and give me something I can work with.

SCHLOCK: Can you work with this? It has a button you push.

VFX: PUSH

SFX: BOOM

ELF: Assets like "I can blow up a shuttle with this button" should come earlier in the brainstorming.

SCHLOCK: Sorry.

ELF: Sergeant!

SCHLOCK: But now we have more TIME for "sorry."